1. darkhawkex on 04-09-2010
not bad, could have ...
not bad, could have worked a bit more on continuity, but the music choice was good... the story should be slightly altered though, so that Blazer-Man is actually a gay and tries to get the Waiter's attention, lol

2. kar2988 on 28-08-2010
This is a good ...
This is a good attempt, but a bit incomplete IMO. The waiter's thing for the girl could've been made a bit more subtle. The girl was probably trying too hard, every other person in the cafe would've seen her had she done things like this. And why didn't the director explore the possibility of an unnoticed love for the waiter? Some girl eyein him from the corner of the cafe? If she (hidden till the last frame) was shown sighing in the last shot, it would've catapulted this to a new level.

3. afsoonf on 26-08-2010
poor guy, thats ...
poor guy, thats what usually happens, you miss the signs of somebody who truly likes you because your mind is occupied with someone whom you want to believe likes you!!

4. kiranmanoharan98 on 23-08-2010
hmmm k... soooo.... ...
hmmm k... soooo..... wat's the story....???

5. flowersweed on 18-08-2010
well done :)
well done :)

6. sesquey on 14-08-2010
Nice job...LOVED ...
Nice job...LOVED the stirring, I was laughing so hard!

7. tamilrapragan on 06-08-2010
wow Superb!!
wow Superb!!

8. hunneyguy on 02-08-2010
Amit too good...
Amit too good...

9. sadiqkhan1979india on 27-07-2010
good. work nice to ...
good. work nice to watch

10. thedemimusicluvrfan on 26-07-2010
Poor guy...
Poor guy...

11. kikavampe on 26-07-2010
this is love in ...
this is love in real life. good job :)

12. superawesom3 on 23-07-2010
Too bad, should ...
Too bad, should couldve hade a great life with him.

13. ramalekshmans on 09-07-2010
Usual, but I liked ...
Usual, but I liked the way you think, its different.

14. livefilmsonline on 08-07-2010
@utopianguy Mate ...
@utopianguy Mate show me the movies you directed! this movie ain't great but its his first attempt, give him some guidance to improve and don't discourage anyone even steven spielberg first movie was shit but now he is one of the top director in the world.

15. utopianguy on 20-06-2010
Everything about ...
Everything about this movie is Pathetic. Actors are at the height of Overacting. Don't give me that "You are rude" crap. I hope this guy doesn't make anymore movies because we have enough of such pathetic directors.

16. allanrimban on 06-06-2010
Ahh, so that's why ...
Ahh, so that's why that girl yesterday at the coffee shop threw a spoon

17. DragonsGuardian on 29-05-2010
Your short films ...
Your short films need more of a story line it seems as though you were rushing it too much you could have made it like skipping scenes you know the waiter could have asked her out and if they'd gona out she could have seen the other man and sort of walked after him it was good all in all though

18. alliemabee on 26-04-2010
aww. how sweet. ...
aww. how sweet. hey! she didn't pay the bill!

19. andreagarwal on 21-04-2010
good job....keep it ...
good job....keep it up....

20. Snehir1 on 13-04-2010
very good..... ...
very good.....from-snehir

21. macferantony on 10-04-2010
Excellent work... ...
Excellent work...Keep it Up...I like the movie very much and its intresting...Amit...GOOD JOB MAN

22. arashmehr7000 on 04-04-2010
fantastic
fantastic

23. chelseagrin1992 on 04-04-2010
:( great
:( great

24. mahesh2665 on 20-03-2010
very nice film ...
very nice film indeed , it shows the intelligence of the film maker who shot it at one location and with minimum props

25. amitmkhanna on 10-03-2010
hey thanks harry... ...
hey thanks harry... gr8 waiting to c ur short film